Friday 21 October 2016

Term 4 Week 2 Writing Reflection,

This week for writing. We have been writing explanations about special place for our family. My special place for my family is the  Blaketown Rugby Club.    

A special place for my family 

3 comments:

  1. Ki Ora Kaleb S it is Oliver. I really really like your writing that you did. The thing that I like the most is how you put your tittle in a different text but maybe next time you should add more information on what you are writing about.

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  2. Ki Ora Kaleb S it is Oliver. I really really like your writing that you did. The thing that I like the most is how you put your tittle in a different text but maybe next time you should add more information on what you are writing about.

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  3. Hi I like your work that you have been doing and it looks cool I like that your special place for your family it look like a lots of fun and you have lots of fun when you go there hope you have fun next time you go down to blaketown.

    Good bye and see you next time
    From Felix

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.