Friday 23 November 2018

T4 W3 personal

Yesterday I had my first game of touch we played a team and there name was k main and my team name was Blaketown Rugby Club. My team beat them 6-0 and after me and some friends went for a swim at the beach. 

1 comment:

  1. Hi Kaleb ,
    I like how you put a picture in ,
    I think that you could have wrote down how you felt , where it was held and also wrote the exact day and not yesterday.

    Good work

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.