Friday 11 November 2016

Term 4 week 5 Writing Reflection, 2016

This week for writing I did one of my myths and legends it was called If you could be a any mithacall crecher what would you be and why. 


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  1. Jessie B GMS14 November 2016 at 09:32

    Kia Ora Kaleb
    Great post. You could work on your spelling you spell mithacall instead of Mythical so check you spelling (and creature). This reminded me of my mythical creature writing about a fairy. What was you favorite part?
    He Whetu Koe! (you're a star)
    From Jessie

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  2. Unknown14 November 2016 at 09:34

    Hello Kaleb, Funny pictures I like your unicorn post but next time you could have a bit more on there and more information not just about there wings.

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  3. Unknown14 November 2016 at 09:48

    Hello Kaleb,
    It Richard here. You have a lot of pictures which is good but you don't have much writing. Do you like dragons?
    Na Richard

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  4. Unknown17 November 2016 at 09:18

    Kia Ora Kaleb, it's Kaleb here from Mamaku. Well done!! Next time you could maybe write a bit more about the Unicorn. And also where you are telling us what your activity is there is a few spelling mistakes. Anyway great blog post. Kia Pia.
    From Kaleb

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